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What Will the killer do? he goes to look for them in their homes (82%)
The massacre of Davids
cominciaDavide went to look for them in their homes one by one with an ax in his hand. Once he entered Yang’s house, Davide stripped his cat and him. Then he went to Denis’ house and killed everyone who was in the house and after five hours he finished his tour between the houses dominating the neighborhood. But one remained, that of Sergeant Bavaro. a scrivere la tua storie…
what will happen in the next episode?
- he doesn't go looking for him (14%)
- gets lost in the forest (14%)
- he enters the Bavarian sergeant's house and kills him (71%)
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19/03/2024 at 09:45
Feedback da parte della docente: quando narrate al present simple, attenzione a ricordare le variazioni ortografiche in terza persona singolare.
27/02/2024 at 09:32
Commento da parte della docente: buona la trama, attenzione a rispettare i tempi verbali e a non passare alternativamente dal passato al presente senza una consecutio temporum. Tenetelo a mente per la stesura del prossimo episodio. Buon lavoro!