From the beginning
Marco is an eleven year old boy, green eyes and black hair, he is a very intelligent boys, but he is very afreid of one thing, ghosts. He has a youngher brother named Francesco who also has the same fear as Marco. One day the boys and their parents moved to an old isolanted house near which there was a forest. They moved because their father had a job offer and for this reason they wanted to move closer to the city. This house is very disturbing and hides a secret.
What is the secret?
- It was inhabited by witches (50%)
- It was used by witches (0%)
- His father already lived there as a child (50%)
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16/04/2024 at 08:37
Feedback da parte della docente: gli episodi sono troppo corti per poter essere considerati tali. Dal prossimo iniziate a scrivere di più. Buona l’idea di base della storia.
12/03/2024 at 09:38
Feedback da parte della docente: l’inizio suscita curiosità nel lettore, avete scelto un ottimo incipit. Fate attenzione a rispettare la concordanza dei tempi verbali e allo spelling dei vocaboli. Buon prossimo episodio