Dove eravamo rimasti?
Chapter 4: one, two, three…let’s see what you’re hiding me
Lisa was thinking about how to find out more about Eric without sounding like a detective asking him if he is a murderer or not. So she came up with the “great” idea of somehow going to her house, at least to see if she could get any information.
– Hello! Eric, I think we have to do some work together. Would you like to meet at your house? Of course, only if you can.
– Eh- eh- yes, we can meet at my house. Just let me know when and what time so I can be ready.– Hm, ready with a hidden corpse? Oh, thank goodness I just thought it and didn’t say it, Lisa watch your words, dammit.
– Okay, then…see you later. Today at 4 after school do you think?
– Sure, see you then. Bye bye!
Okay, first part done. Surely he is hiding something or hiding something that does not make me suspect him.
Going to Eric’s house, Lisa felt something strange when she was close to her, she realized that she was a little further behind him. Where had she come from?
The facade of the house conveys a feeling of coldness that gives a feeling that something had happened there.
When I was about to approach the house I saw in Eric’s garden some latex gloves, 2 school jackets and a military badge with the initials of “S.E.” in a bag. At that moment I was stunned. Eric was already at his house while I was walking at a slow pace due to the shock I was in.
– Hello Lisa, are you going in or are you going to stay in the garden looking at the garbage?
– Hello Eric, yes of course I’ll come in. Let me call my mom to tell her I came here, I don’t want her to worry because I didn’t go home after school.
– Oh no problem, I’ll wait for you inside the house, it looks like it’s about to rain.
I called my mom in case something happened, the truth is I was a little afraid because it is very strange to have found that…
What should Lisa do now?
- Lisa tries to talk to Eric more. (17%)
- Lisa ignores what she saw and tries to act normal. (0%)
- Lisa grabs the garden bag after working together. (83%)

05/06/2024 at 09:59
Feedback da parte della docente: tieni sempre il lettore sulle spine, brava!
16/05/2024 at 09:26
Feedback da parte della docente: ricorda che i nostri racconti devono essere scritti in lingua inglese, così che possiate esercitarvi nel writing…
11/04/2024 at 09:39
bello
21/03/2024 at 10:28
Feedback da parte della docente: attenzione ai tempi verbali. Ricorda di mettere la “s” in terza persona singolare del presente indicativo e di coniugare i tempi al passato quando hai iniziato la frase al simple past.
Buon prossimo episodio!