Dove eravamo rimasti?
The basement
When the man saw them he didn’t think twice about running towards them; As soon as Edoardo and the teacher saw him running, they stood up and started thinking about what they could do to avoid having to face this man. A brilliant idea came to Edoardo’s mind: that of passing through the small window and passing inside the factory as the man had passed from outside. So they immediately opened the window and went from there climbing on the shelves inside the factory to reach the ground. Finally shortly after they reached the ground but as soon as they turned they saw that the man was coming down like they had done, so they immediately started running towards the school. After 10 minutes they arrived and had the school announce that they had to get out of there as soon as possible or the man would find them. Once out, everyone headed to a safe place: the basement of the school. They arrived there via a descent and opening a gate, but they saw…
What did they see?
- the man (25%)
- Giada and Emanuele with their hands and legs tied and with the man pointing a gun at their head (25%)
- A bomb with a 5 minute timer and “From the man in the mask” written on it (50%)

05/06/2024 at 10:01
Feedback da parte della docente: lo sviluppo del racconto sta diventando sempre più interessante, brava!
30/05/2024 at 09:30
Feedback da parte della docente: lo sviluppo del racconto è interessante, brava
16/05/2024 at 09:23
Feedback da parte della docente: anche se corto, il tuo incipit è buono e desta curiosità nel lettore.