death at first sight

BEFORE DEATH

S-\Two 13 and 14 year old cousins ​​named Maya and Ilaria decided to go to a football match to see two of their friends, after the first half they decided to take the train and go to the amusement park, once they arrived they met with these two boys that one of them the two girls knew but the other said they had never seen him, Ilary as soon as she saw him and the boy she had never seen named Paul she fell in love with him.

A few days passed and the boy wrote to her but she didn’t approach her much, due to events she had experienced in the past so she didn’t trust her, after 3 weeks of doing nothing but writing to each other continuously they decided to go out with their cousin Maya, they waited for him at the station but when he arrived there was something wrong because he was dressed all in black with 2 suitcases and with a balaclava and out of breath, the girls both looked at each other so scared that they couldn’t believe what they were seeing with their eyes.

what will happen?

  • he shoots her in the head (18%)
    18
  • He takes her to a car and kidnaps her (65%)
    65
  • They have a romantic dinner (18%)
    18
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  • Feedback da parte della docente: l’incipit è buono e il titolo è molto originale. Attenzione però a come strutturi le frasi: sono molto lunghe e intricate. Cerca di semplificarle e accorciarle nel prossimo episodio. Buon proseguimento!

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